long zhu , Sep 05, 2010; 12:27 p.m.
I've been using my brand new 16-35mm VR lens with D700 for over a week now. A few times I have got two dark corners. They seem to happen only zooming 20mm - 16mm and do not happen all the time. Also the lens seems to have some black dots (only can be seen by facing it against bright sky). They all seem to be inside the lens as I have tried to clean the lens and it doesn't help. attached is one of the pics. Not sure if the lens's got some sort of defects (not sealing well for dust and moisture) as I was in Venice shooting. thanks.
two dark coners (upleft and lowright)
John Tran
, Sep 05, 2010; 12:57 p.m.
1. Dark corners: Did you have a filter on? If yes, try not using the filter. You don't even have to take any pictures. If it's there, you can see it without turning the camera on. Did you use the right hood ? and put the hood on in correct position? Try without the hood to see if there is anything different
2. Black dots: more likely they are something sticked on your sensor. Do a sensor dust test
Tommy Lee , Sep 05, 2010; 01:02 p.m.
Did you have a lens hood/shade on?
If yes, you might not have turn that all the way and locks it.
long zhu , Sep 05, 2010; 01:05 p.m.
No, I didn't use a filter. I use the hood comes with the lens. The two dark corners come and go. That's why I am thinking it may be related to moisture. thanks John.
Just saw Tom's reply. I didn't check the hood. That could be the cause. will check if it happens next time. thanks!
update: I've just managed to reproduce the problems (dark corners). It's the hood (when it is not tight all the way) causing the problem. Thanks John and Tommy!
Michael R. Freeman 
, Sep 05, 2010; 01:13 p.m.
The two diagonally opposed dark corners could very well be a lens hood that is not properly locked in the correct position. Presumably you are using the HB-23 hood? Make sure it is properly installed on the front bayonet mount and turned until you here it click and lock into place.
Do you see black dots in photos of blue sky or do you actually see black dots when looking directly into the lens? The first would be sensor dust. The second could be anything.
Arthur Richardson
, Sep 05, 2010; 02:03 p.m.
It's the lens hood, I have the same problem with some of my lenses. The moment the hood is not in place properly this vignetting problem occurs. Turn until it locks. Or send the lens to me, and wait for eternity....
long zhu , Sep 05, 2010; 04:39 p.m.
Michael /Arthur,
The dark corners were caused by improperly positioning of the hood. I only seem to see black dots on the lens through the viewfinder. I don't see any block dots on the photos from the computer monitor. I'm wondering if these very small black dots were caused by lenspen which I've used for cleaning.? Although I've used lenspen for the other DX lens and it was fine.
thanks.
Miguel Martinez , Sep 05, 2010; 05:07 p.m.
I'm glad it's solved. It would have driven me nuts to detect this precisesly in Venice! Anyway, spending some days in Venice with a D700 and the 16-35 must have been a nightmare. For the memory cards I mean.
Rodney Ninow , Sep 05, 2010; 10:35 p.m.
Spots that you see in the viewfinder, but not in an image is 99% of the time dirt on your mirror.
Michael R. Freeman 
, Sep 05, 2010; 10:39 p.m.
... dirt on your mirror
Focusing screen. The mirror is not in the plane of focus, and dust/dirt on the mirror is not rendered in sharp focus in the viewfinder.