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Scott Murphy , January 26, 2010; 11:11 P.M.

This could have been a lovely portrait, but for me the cigarette and smoke killed it.

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Oskar Papierz , January 27, 2010; 08:39 A.M.

I like it very much! Regards.

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Michael C , January 27, 2010; 11:13 A.M.

For me, the cigarette and the smoke makes a good shot an even better shot... well done!

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jim bonnici , January 27, 2010; 12:28 P.M.

crop

I am perplexed by the cropping. The top of the picture has 'negative space' while the model's arm and posterior are cropped off. I found the smoke to be distracting only to the point that it looked 'un-natural'. I will add the lighting is very good and the 'peek-a-boo' makes this look very candid.

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Kallol Majumdar , February 05, 2010; 03:30 P.M.

Wonderful portrait...love the details of the smoke...though somebody may not like it...but the artist excelled...my best

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