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Eduardo Agustin Carrasco , June 16, 2010; 12:03 P.M.

wonderful portrit, congratulastions

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Esteban Rios , June 16, 2010; 07:43 P.M.

Nice B&W, The composition reflects tenderness. Good job.

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Mark Chartrand , June 18, 2010; 03:55 P.M.

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Barbara,

Love your photograph of the two cuties. The focus is very good. The skin tone is very nice. You have very good contrast. The blacks and whites have good detail. Her make-up looks good, but there is a white speck on her (the girl's) left eyelash that should be removed. I like the way she is looking down at kitty. The soft lighting works well. The background is nicely neutral and she is well separated from it.

I would crop some off the left side so that you have better left and right compositional balance. This is quite right heavy. Taking the girl and the kitty as one element, I would pretty much center it.

You really don't want the kitty's ear in front of the girl's mouth.

Nice shot,

Mark

 

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