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Diasma

Taken long time ago, but I want your opinion or suggestion. Thanks for your help.

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David McCracken , August 09, 2005; 04:18 A.M.

A little too hot...

It is an interesting light study and I think the result is OK. I do feel there is to much light on the flower which has more colour than you show here. Also the flare to the right is a touch distracting and could be easily cloned out.

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Mohsen Nafar , August 09, 2005; 04:38 A.M.

Very beautiful. good lighting .

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Hoon You , August 09, 2005; 07:11 A.M.

I agree, David!

Thanks David, I totally agree that the flower is too bright. It would be much better if the folower had more detail. but I left the flare on the right side deliberately as a background, for my intention was not only describing the detail of Diasma, but also to express the emotion of the flower...well not much of success any way... I really really appriciate your comments. Thank you very much.

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