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Inside the box

Just looking for simple feedback. Used a ring flash, kind of like the shadowing. Did a series with her

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Jyh Ren Lim , February 17, 2004; 11:28 A.M.

Nice

Nice, really nice and sexy. Keep up the good work!

FXT PIX , February 17, 2004; 11:35 P.M.

cool pic - but this would work better as a figure nude - hence - face buried into her chest - or at very least NO smile!

BenoƮt Marchal , February 19, 2004; 02:15 P.M.

This is a fresh, funny photo. I cannot find anything to change or remove in this image. I love the relaxed, playful pose, the way she smiles and how you compose the image with a strong contrast between the box and the square format.

I had a look at the other photos in this "box" series and I think this one is head and shoulders above the others. I think this one works because her body makes a rectangle too (kinda, at least it flows with the box). In the other photos in the series, it's square, rectangle and then some other shape... too many different shapes.

But this one works beautifully. I rated it 7 and I seldom rate a photo that high.

David Weaver , February 19, 2004; 02:20 P.M.

girl in a box. Original??

every studio photog I know does this shot. Nice lighting. Good use of the ring. Pleasing but not original...off to go take a snap of El Cap now... :-) (not rated)

... Timber ... , February 19, 2004; 02:21 P.M.

No, the smile is great. It is a whimsical picture that probably belongs in Playboy. She has a great smile and she is a "10". I cannot think of anyway to improve this image except to possibily add some kickers along the edge of the box. This would make the box glow alittle.

Sarah Marie Jones , February 19, 2004; 05:08 P.M.

Funny and nicely done. Best regards, sarah

Jean-Paul Nacivet , March 30, 2005; 02:47 A.M.

Mailing error!! Eric

Please Eric,be nice to your model, close the box,and forward it (her) to her right destination, Bali the island of gods and goddess. at: www.bali-luxury-villa.com a flower like this one needs a luxurious garden to bloom and expand.

Alex Kinnan , August 07, 2007; 12:26 A.M.

Very nice. I like the composition and the limited range of colour in the photo; it's very graphic.

I also think it's nice that you left the sides off of the box so the lady can get out. I assume that's what she's smiling about.

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