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John Rhodebeck , March 02, 2004; 01:27 P.M.

Shadow appears contrived (IMO), otherwise good.

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James Sarte , March 02, 2004; 01:56 P.M.

Nice, simple, and good tonal variance.

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Olga Gerasimova , March 04, 2004; 01:26 P.M.

Great!! "In expectation of the artist."

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Paul David Athey , March 04, 2004; 05:33 P.M.

I could not agree with Olga more - superb piece of work.

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Gary H Sp , March 04, 2004; 08:19 P.M.

Exquisite in its grittiness! - best, Gary

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Yuri Bonder , March 05, 2004; 04:27 A.M.

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Composition is great, light is great, feel is great

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John Marsden , March 05, 2004; 06:26 A.M.

9/10 + 8/10 + dissonance = 11/10

Great photo, but for something that is so dirty and gritty perhaps a little too perfect in framing.

Maybe move the brush off centre. Mis-align the picture frame. Put more of that stringy stuff around.

The flow from bottom left to top right, along the brush, is just too perfect for my taste. The background tiles might look better at an angle. These with the angle of the frame they could then produce more tension and dissonance in the picture.

Technically great 9/10. Aesthetic (8/10 which is still good)perhaps needs a few more jazz sharp and flat notes to make it 11/10.

Thank you for displaying this image.

All the best John

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Antonio Baiano , March 05, 2004; 12:42 P.M.

molto bella!

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Guido Fulgenzi , March 11, 2004; 01:26 A.M.

Grandissima cretività,veramente una prova d'artista!

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Aykan ÖZENER , November 30, 2004; 05:21 P.M.

SUPER

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