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Church at dawn

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Bill Keaton , June 05, 2004; 12:17 P.M.

Everything is in reasonable focus except the branch in the upper left, and that makes it distracting.

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Diana D. , June 05, 2004; 12:23 P.M.

branch

Actually I included that branch on purpose, to give the impression of multiple layers and depth. Tell me what do you think

Jim Witherspoon , June 05, 2004; 12:24 P.M.

I would remove the blured branch in the upper left.

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Michael Kubota , June 05, 2004; 12:34 P.M.

ditto

Sorry, but I'm going to have to agree with the upper left branch. Otherwise, this is a gorgeous shot. VERY nice work!

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Fabian Fischer , June 05, 2004; 01:13 P.M.

the branch in the upper left is imho disturbing

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Diana D. , June 05, 2004; 09:19 P.M.

fixed - branch removed

I removed the branch in PS. Please tell me what you think now. Thanks a lot for all your comments

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Jury Nel , June 10, 2004; 02:07 P.M.

No Branch

I like it better without the branch. The trouble with silhouette photo's is that you need the "sharp" lines, that blurry branch does distract your attention from the church. Seems like it adds another subject to the picture.

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Tom H , June 13, 2004; 10:41 A.M.

Same idea, different location.

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Florian Koller , June 25, 2004; 04:59 A.M.

Wonderful sunset. Just beautieful

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