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Anne

My first photo on this site. I normaly use www.fotokritik.dk but I need better Critique to learn more. Hope you will help.

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Lars Raun , June 19, 2004; 04:50 A.M.

Hej Jan gamle dreng :o) Velkommen til photo.net !! Superdejligt portr洠du l槧er ud med. Smukke hudtoner, flot lys i �jnene... M峫e lidt for h岤t besk岥t, men det ved jeg ikke ret meget om *s* fotokritik er ved at blive �delagt af 'trollere' og andre bitre mennesker, s堪eg er sikker p堤u bliver glad for dette site!

focus mankind , June 19, 2004; 04:51 A.M.

Hi Jan - it's a beautiful portrait - congrats! You may frame the photos in the future, so it does not melt with the background of the website. Keep on posting. focus

Tom T , June 19, 2004; 05:13 A.M.

Hi Jan!

Nice portrait indeed! Well framed, good composition. Perhaps the loose hair should not have crossed her eyes, but that would be the only gripe.

When it comes to getting feedback on photo's you'll have a hard time on this site. Most members just rate and leave no comments. Many members only rate their "friends" high - so you'll see plenty of mediocre shots in the top photo lists.

But... if you persist, you'll stumble upon folks that really and honestly try to comment constructively on each other's shots. Hope to see more of you here.

Regards,

Tom

Andrea Salini , June 19, 2004; 05:34 A.M.

Great portrait and .... beautiful model!

Tim Nichols , June 19, 2004; 09:52 A.M.

Incredible

Among the best portraits ever. I love this one.

Jan Emil Christiansen , June 19, 2004; 01:36 P.M.

Thank you

Thank you for the comments and ratings.

Francesco Martini , June 19, 2004; 01:46 P.M.

..also if is your first portrait..is great!!!

Jean-Paul Nacivet , June 20, 2004; 12:17 A.M.

very good

Beautiful model, Hair crossing the eye?! I like it with or without. I would have frame slitly differently, keeping more of the forehead, you probably have another frame like this anyway. Waiting for more.

Pnina Evental , June 20, 2004; 08:40 A.M.

Nice composition of a portrait. Pnina

Stavros Papadakis , June 20, 2004; 03:52 P.M.

wow

amazing color/tone, beautiful eyes/model, clever not showing her hair for originality, i love also her hair in her face, amazing portrait, bravo

Ugur Atila , June 20, 2004; 08:49 P.M.

Welcome...

Natural posture.

Sacha De Carlo , June 20, 2004; 09:32 P.M.

One among the very best portraits seen on this site, IMHO !!! Cheers, Sacha ;-)

Édith B. , June 21, 2004; 08:18 A.M.

Empty pose in my opinion. Her eyes are empty. The light is ok, but not really creative. An ok picture. Certainly not the best portrait on photo.net, sorry to disagree with the previous comment.

Freddy Jason , June 21, 2004; 11:03 A.M.

exelent girl...

please say her that she is so beautifull...

Jonas Nielsen , June 21, 2004; 01:35 P.M.

Utrolig smukt portr洮

Jacek Pokrzywa , June 21, 2004; 03:25 P.M.

Is this...

...Paris Hilton after eating a few Big Macs? Love the pic. Congratulations.

Trever MacPherson , June 21, 2004; 03:42 P.M.

Very nice. Not too soft, not too harsh. I think I might have liked more of the forehead, and perhaps the hair out of the eyes. If this was originally shot in colour, I might have wanted to see her original eye colour, she has very striking eyes, maybe moreso by the use of B&W.

Paul JACOB , June 21, 2004; 05:34 P.M.

Superb - a great portrait! Congrats - Paul

Phillip Filtz , June 21, 2004; 06:15 P.M.

Love the strands of hair dude... ;) My thing is more of dramatic lighting. I would like to have seen it lite in that fashion, but don't get me wrong. I like it as is....

Best, Phillip

Geo Sun , June 21, 2004; 07:35 P.M.

wonderful

i like it.

Tommy Lee , June 21, 2004; 10:57 P.M.

Nice Work

Nice Work, I wonder how a color version would look?

frazer kearney , June 22, 2004; 04:33 A.M.

Reminds me of the famous Steve McCurry shot of the Afghan refugee. Love the way the clock has been arranged and I have to say that I like the strands of hair comming over the eye.

Burt Sap , June 25, 2004; 03:52 P.M.

EdithB's Comments

BTW, You'll learn to ignore this rater in time. She is typical of others who have no photos posted and yet they show up in the rating of the very best photos with low ratings and pseudo-expert comments. Most do not respond to such raters.

Brooks Gelfand , June 28, 2004; 10:52 A.M.

Very professional job.

Tim Nichols , September 02, 2004; 09:03 P.M.

After months of viewing others...

This remains about the best portrait I've seen yet.

e e , September 05, 2004; 01:44 P.M.

It is a beautiful portrait. I wish the top of her forhead wasn't cut off, the forehead is often the most beautiful part of a face.

TC Reed , September 11, 2004; 02:08 P.M.

Though I'm not qualified to properly critque your work, I admire your use of knowledge in lighting which you bring to your work as well as a great eye for framing in a shot. I like tight shots which sometimes take off the top of a head or limb to bring the focus in more closely to what the photographer wants us to see.

You seem to understand this concept and use it well.

Good work!

Stefano Perez Tonella , February 16, 2005; 05:06 P.M.

excellent potrait, pose and skin texture. Great work

robert stefano , February 26, 2005; 11:08 A.M.

Great portrait. Model is beautiful

Vítor Rei , April 10, 2005; 07:03 P.M.

ohhh!

A great face! A great shot! Beautiful eyes! ohhh

Dave Klassen , July 21, 2005; 10:36 P.M.

Beautiful portrait and model! Powerful, gripping eyes. The head covering gives a level of integrity to the model and the photograph. Excellent!

Martin Mounzer , October 22, 2005; 08:51 A.M.

Hmm..

Very nice expression and crop. Powerful photo.

Sarkis Baghramyan , November 12, 2005; 05:41 P.M.

7-7

Superb portrait, bravo!

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