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write your name in the sky

I'll write your name in the sky,.... Set it flying so high,..... Let the wind blow it my way,..............the lyrics of a song I like !


Scott Cromwell , July 22, 2004; 12:47 A.M.

I really like this 4eyes. I've been staring at it for about 5 minutes now.

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saul moreno , July 22, 2004; 12:54 A.M.

Mirror Image

This is an awesome picture, I love the glassy water. The Leg makes this even better. I Love It!! Good Job

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William Lawless , July 22, 2004; 01:00 A.M.

Including the rail and person is good.

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Peter Jones , July 22, 2004; 01:07 A.M.

Your inclusion of the leg does it for me as well. It gives me the impression of tranquility while watching the sunset, rather than it merely being a picture of a sunset. It's a beautiful image, color and composition.

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Ches Hamill , July 22, 2004; 01:21 A.M.

Nice composition!

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Peter Bilitch , July 22, 2004; 03:15 A.M.

Looks like the sky was created by a stroke from a giant's paintbrush. The reflections seem to double the beauty.

Everything is well positioned within the frame and this aspect is enhanced by the framework of the wooden railings.


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Andrea Salini , July 22, 2004; 05:23 A.M.

I rally like it, good composition, great colors, beautiful sky, the idea to include the body is good.

Only 2 issue: the bottle and (IMO) there is a strange effect created by the orizont and the fence, I mean probably with 1 of these horizontal and not sloping could be better....

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Francesco Martini , July 22, 2004; 11:38 A.M.

another fantastic image on the beach!!!!

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eric t. , July 22, 2004; 01:14 P.M.

I live at the beach...work in an office...this makes me watch the clock! Is it time for that sunset??? Superb work!

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Omer Dundar , July 22, 2004; 03:17 P.M.



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Igor Laptev , July 22, 2004; 05:58 P.M.

Very nice shot!

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Didi Damian , July 24, 2004; 12:35 A.M.

The inclusion of the human element really makes this beautiful sunset stand out.

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Michele Berti , July 26, 2004; 08:41 A.M.

Another winner!

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Norman Perkel , July 29, 2004; 07:20 A.M.

Very nice shot. I like the person to the right huxtaposed to the backdrop of the beautiful sky.. very well thought out. Your images are a lesson in the original.

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John Peri , August 29, 2004; 07:16 A.M.

Yes, a very clever shot. I really enjoyed looking at it. Well done.

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David Bohn , November 04, 2004; 03:48 P.M.


This shot has everything! I could stare at it all day and not get tired of it. Good work

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Michael Kelliher , December 25, 2004; 12:26 P.M.

If I was there for that sunset I would have wanted to take that pic but I never would have thought to include the leg, which truely makes the photo. I would have made it plain but now it is an awesome photo. 7/7

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Pioles Cramponis , August 24, 2005; 07:38 A.M.

Great shot. Love that leg! :-)

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Umit Altun , September 29, 2005; 04:35 A.M.

7:7 Excellent work!!!


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Jana Vanourkova , March 05, 2007; 06:27 A.M.

original, cheers Jana

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Brad Kim , May 05, 2008; 02:05 P.M.

Extraordinary image with excellent composition!

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anmol sharma , January 13, 2011; 08:22 A.M.



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Sushaya Siriwardana , October 19, 2011; 02:42 A.M.



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Sushaya Siriwardana , October 19, 2011; 02:47 A.M.




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