Photographer's Request for Critique
--Suvi S
Thanks for any constructive advice/criticism/comments in advance.
The image has been altered in so far as I have enhanced the contrast a notch. Do you
think the image works?
Critiques
Miguel Alho , August 06, 2004; 05:40 A.M.
great
I like it alot. The composition is great.
Terry Ward 
, August 06, 2004; 05:41 A.M.
I think it is a classic B&W shot. The geometry and shades are very nice. Good work. T
Doug Berryhill , August 06, 2004; 05:51 A.M.
The patterns and the textures here make this a very appealing shot. Also like the tilt. Fine work!
Raoul Bajaj , August 06, 2004; 06:26 A.M.
Wonderful shot. Love the lighting effect.
luca de bartolomeo , August 06, 2004; 06:56 A.M.
a wonderful prospective... impressive b&w.
great shot.
Tom Sperduto , August 06, 2004; 07:06 A.M.
Nice use of leading lines.
Loft Portugal , August 06, 2004; 11:56 A.M.
Dear SUVI.,
You have a special eye and did a great job.
6/7 and my Portugues compliments for this orginal photo !!
Linda Keagle , August 06, 2004; 01:06 P.M.
I agree with all of the above. The figure, slightly out of focus gives it even more movement....
ilkka räisänen , August 07, 2004; 02:46 A.M.
Suvi-san no e wa totemo kirei desu. Demo o "capution" wa nan desu ka?
Detlef Klahm , August 07, 2004; 01:55 P.M.
a simple and strong image...well composed...it has mystery, it has a story!
Windle Lands , August 09, 2004; 03:43 A.M.
amazing perspective. It looks like a steep hill
In-seon Son , August 17, 2004; 06:55 A.M.
great
Balaji , October 02, 2004; 11:10 P.M.
Oistein Thomassen 
, November 13, 2004; 09:55 A.M.
It definitely works! The lines contribute in giving this photograph a lot of punch. I really prefer the simplicity here. Tiliting the camera has also resulted in a slightly more dramatic scene.
Oistein
Jung Yang , April 02, 2005; 10:09 P.M.
Rasmus Lindersson 
, August 03, 2006; 05:54 A.M.
Very well composed photograph.
David Taiwan , May 29, 2008; 02:14 A.M.
Your Pic
Hi Suvi
Your picture is very well done - I especially like the use of lines, circles and positioning that works so well in directing my eye.
Thank you for not "messing it up" by altering your image too much. Sometimes less is definately more - this is the one of those times.
Well done 7/7
Jean-Pierre Van Wambeke , May 29, 2008; 05:34 A.M.
Everything i like in a picture
The feel, the angle, the light, the lines, ... great pic. JiPe
Jatinder S. Keith , May 29, 2008; 05:35 A.M.
Effective Diagonal Composition
It is a very effective diagonal composition. Verticle lines in the left half of the photo give the feel of stability and stillness. The lines on the right half give a strong feel of motion. The position of the man has broken a rule for inducing a feel of motion; 'leave more space ahead of the moving object than behind'. Yet the sweeping lines ahead of him, appearing to merge at infinity give an impression of a long distance ahead of him. A nice photo composed of just lines.
Kamran Efendiev , December 18, 2008; 05:19 A.M.
I'd recognize that place even from the smallest thambnails... It must be the Tokyo International Center... I've been there and took many photos... This composition is very good... Congrats... Regards...
Martín Guerrero-Vértiz 
, December 18, 2008; 11:54 A.M.
Great composition!!!
Very effective directionality that is supported by the contrast of black and white. The presence of the walker finishes off a very good idea ...
fatemeh hendijani , December 18, 2008; 03:33 P.M.
Hi
I think it is very well, the black and white mode makes it very special, Great.
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