Photographer's Request for Critique
--Roberto Quesada
High Contrast, Please Comment
Beginning to work in the darkroom. This pic was printed like this,
as a high contrast series.
The make up requested was simple black lines. The design belongs to
the stylist.
Regards,
Oliver White , September 29, 2004; 02:39 P.M.
I really like the reflection on the eye...I don't know what you were going for, but it seems to me like cropping out the white space on the right would result in a stronger composition.
Dana Goad , September 29, 2004; 02:40 P.M.
seeing this one it seemed as if it was a photo of a drawing except the glare in the eye I had to see what your other photos look like you such nice photos but I am not that keen on this one. Maybe just not my style. but is a nice photo
Roberto Quesada , September 29, 2004; 06:23 P.M.
Oliver and Dana,
Thank you for your comments. I intended to get black lines, over a white background (I know, very vague ;-). This pic is already very cropped, but maybe your are right about the empty space to the right. I'm not sure about the eyebrow. What do you think?
Dana, I think I wanted a surreal look. As if the eye was floating on white.
Regards,
Becky Cockrum 
, September 30, 2004; 08:24 P.M.
The reflection in the eye draws me into this...
oscar arias , October 14, 2004; 07:02 P.M.
foton
buena foto boby, porque no califico el jueves en el club?
Roberto Quesada , October 18, 2004; 09:22 P.M.
Oscar,
Gracias por tu comentario. No calific� porque estaba fuera de tema. Alto contraste=solo blancos y negros. A buena hora me explican ;-)
