Photographer's Request for Critique
--Alon Brik
Cold.
Comments are very welcome. Thanks everyone!
Pascal Henry , December 08, 2004; 09:29 P.M.
You are an artist my friend, The only thing that refrain me from giving you the two big 7's is the feet which i wuold have prefer both inside the frame. otherwise very good and powerful. congrats, Pascal
Keith T. , December 08, 2004; 09:42 P.M.
A7/O7
Excellent balance between the matallic shades of the knife and the rest which is very matte.
nathan g , December 09, 2004; 12:25 A.M.
Justin Huett , December 09, 2004; 02:44 A.M.
Painfully Disturbing
But great work all the same. Framing could be improved, but it is powerful none-the-less
kristin morales , December 09, 2004; 10:57 A.M.
YES! dark and contrasty...perfect for the mood of this slightly scary shot.
Biliana Rakocevic , December 09, 2004; 11:41 A.M.
6/6 Great results!
Great idea, concept and realization daer Alon!
Very different and impressive my Friend!
Biliana
Andrey Vladimirov , December 09, 2004; 12:09 P.M.
And a nice Photoshop work, too!
B B , December 09, 2004; 01:46 P.M.
Very powerful composition, I think that if you level the knees, you could get the feet inside the frame. A little more space on the left side could also help. Anyway great picture. Congratulations.
B. B.
Tuhin Saha , December 10, 2004; 10:20 A.M.
Alon > the image portrays the feeling that this man is a psychopath/maniac , in that respect I like the position of the legs , in tensed position , but the food for thought ( for you )is the upper part of the body and the bangle ( should the bangle be there ?) . The upper part looks well nourished ( allow me to use this word ). And should the underpant be on ? But this is a very creative image and the B & W works fine , congratulations for this image , 6/7..
Forgot to mention - I like the feet as they are ..
Alon Brik , December 10, 2004; 01:26 P.M.
Thanks! I will defenatly take it to consideration next time I do something like that! Keep that good critique coming, that's how we learn! Thanks a lot!
Shmil Gandelman , December 10, 2004; 01:50 P.M.
Looks like 20D found himself a Master. Congrat... (Nice add for CUTCO 9.25" French Chef knife, made in New York)
Alon Brik , December 10, 2004; 04:24 P.M.
Thanks a lot. Right on! Don't tell me you sell these knives! lol regards!
Shmil Gandelman , December 11, 2004; 06:49 P.M.
No I dont. But vizit:- Sacha De Carlo- galery=> " The way of the warrior. "
Alon Brik , December 11, 2004; 06:52 P.M.
Can you give me the link? ..I'm having a hard time finding him. thanks.
Shmil Gandelman , December 11, 2004; 06:57 P.M.
Alon, Sacha De Carlo is first critique on yor "LOL" photograph. www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=2729233 And check THOUGHTS,and Nana Sousa Dias :www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=1098244
