Photographer's Request for Critique
--Jean-Paul Nacivet
Gitane
Shame on me ! sorry for not being very present, I probably miss
wonderfull pictures from other members, I will try to visit more
regularly.
I hope you will enjoy this one!?
Critiques
Manel Soria , January 17, 2005; 05:28 A.M.
Nice photo, excellent background and mood, you should explain me where you find models so willing to suffer difficult conditions :)
Lucas Jarvis , January 17, 2005; 05:44 A.M.
Very nice emotion! Just beautiful
David McCracken 
, January 17, 2005; 06:06 A.M.
Nothing short of brilliant!
There is nothing to say other than I love this shot.
I do feel a little sorry for the model. She must be a very understanding girl!
O. I. , January 17, 2005; 07:00 A.M.
7/7
Kudos to both you and the model. Do you have the same image in color?
Ivar Olsen 
, January 17, 2005; 09:08 A.M.
Ahh!!!! Extraordinary!!! 7/7 from me! Ivar :-)
Glen Evans , January 17, 2005; 09:21 A.M.
Remarkable 7/7
A garden fairy caught in the rain without her wings. Don't worry, they are cold hardy and dry quickly. Beautiful, just beautiful. G.E.
Evgeniy Shaman 
, January 17, 2005; 09:33 A.M.
deep forest
as tale about losted girl, nice work..
Andrea Salini , January 17, 2005; 09:40 A.M.
7/7
Tom Plevnik , January 17, 2005; 10:09 A.M.
7/7
WOW! Speechless......everything in this pictures in done perfect!
Aivar Pärtel , January 17, 2005; 10:25 A.M.
Clément Poline , January 17, 2005; 11:38 A.M.
7/7
I agree with Manel, this background is particulary well chosen. Large leaves, the rain.. very nice tropical atmosphere
Jeff Henry , January 17, 2005; 11:46 A.M.
Fantastic photo!
Great work Jean-Paul! :-)
Rosa Maria González de romero , January 17, 2005; 11:52 A.M.
Bellisima
Excelente es una de las fotos de desnudos que mas me han conmovido felicidades te mereces 7/7
Al Li 
, January 17, 2005; 11:57 A.M.
Beautiful concept, very nice image.
Dima Oukhov , January 17, 2005; 12:16 P.M.
super!!!
Rev. Brent M , January 17, 2005; 12:19 P.M.
7/7
Sergey Efimov , January 17, 2005; 12:30 P.M.
7+7!
Loic Laurent , January 17, 2005; 12:33 P.M.
Amazing picture, great great shot.
Shilesh Jani , January 17, 2005; 12:36 P.M.
7A/7O
Jonathan Farmer , January 17, 2005; 03:15 P.M.
David Stanton 
, January 17, 2005; 03:31 P.M.
7/7
David Maisant , January 17, 2005; 03:37 P.M.
Tr賠tr賠belle image ! Bravo.
Loft Portugal , January 17, 2005; 05:13 P.M.
Indeed.,
so far the best photo in 2005 (IMHO)
Haleh Bryan , January 17, 2005; 05:54 P.M.
A fine example of how a good photograph can evoke the deepest of feelings.
Jahu En , January 18, 2005; 02:12 A.M.
7/7
Amazing picture. Like from some magic mysterious land! Great work!
Claudia Cala' , January 18, 2005; 07:47 A.M.
very beautiful photo! cla
Umair Ghani 
, January 18, 2005; 10:08 A.M.
7/ 7
a remarkable image. truly artistic. surreal & subtle. great feeling & mood in this top shot.
Lucio Virzi' , January 18, 2005; 11:30 A.M.
Saverio Barchiesi , January 18, 2005; 03:21 P.M.
7/7
Marko Peric , January 18, 2005; 04:10 P.M.
Raymond Liguori , January 18, 2005; 04:46 P.M.
Wonderful shot. I love how she fades into the ground, as if she were another flower. Nice slow shutter speed elongates the rain. Depth of field is perfect
STEVE WARD , January 18, 2005; 10:00 P.M.
SW
Jeremy Smith , January 19, 2005; 12:18 A.M.
focus mankind , January 19, 2005; 06:28 A.M.
focus mankind , January 19, 2005; 06:30 A.M.
Speakless II
Have a look at the rating - there are several I just don't understand!
Michael Erard , January 19, 2005; 08:55 A.M.
Wonderful!
I love this shot, you can almost hear the rain hitting the floor and her skin, good background too. that's a 7/7 for me.
Guillermo González , January 19, 2005; 10:48 A.M.
7/7
Hermosamente conmovedora. Felicidades!
Peter van Nugteren , January 19, 2005; 05:22 P.M.
Curves, light, DOF, expression, it all fits and very well composed too.
Congrats Jean-Paul!
Olivier Boireau , January 19, 2005; 06:22 P.M.
very good idea, composition and contrast. very soft and sweet
Wim Ipenburg , January 20, 2005; 05:27 P.M.
Very good image.
Nice pose and composition!
7/7
fred moore , January 22, 2005; 10:28 A.M.
Jean-Paul Nacivet , January 23, 2005; 02:00 A.M.
Merci !
No comment! I'm only overwhelmed to find so many people sharing with me, that same emotion.
What can I (we) do tomorrow to keep the emotion alive, here is our biggest challenge.
Through music, Words, painting,photo, or any other means.
A Chinese saying says:'If one day you realize your dream, it means it was not big enough.
Photo.net community = Quest for the next deep emotion !?
I hope to be able to meet you again in the future, trying to scratch an identical or higher layer of emotion,until life ask me to give up !do they have camera out there ?!
J. Darius Davis , January 26, 2005; 12:16 P.M.
Nice image. It feels a bit too posed. Great idea, wonderful use of DoF.
Vishal Malhotra , January 26, 2005; 10:20 P.M.
i like this image a lot. the tone is awesome. a very smooth gray all around. i don't like the border on it.
nick kessler , January 26, 2005; 11:15 P.M.
one for a wall. very very nice.
Jean-Paul Nacivet , January 26, 2005; 11:33 P.M.
To Vishal
Actually you are right if you mean the black frame,I had myself mixed feeling with the black frame, as it give a limit to the scene.
When the grey frame invite you to go further.
This is why I did'nt put any frame on the last nude I put on PN "Christyana", I could not find a frame fort it, I tried many but it was always better without.
Thanks,
Ján Hronský , January 28, 2005; 03:06 P.M.
Nicole Morozz , January 29, 2005; 03:40 A.M.
I like the mood, very impressive!
Daryl Ashby , January 29, 2005; 04:42 P.M.
Nice shot. Totally original. Brave subject. Good lighting and shutter speed.
subhadip choudhury , February 01, 2005; 03:18 A.M.
Vezon Thierry , February 02, 2005; 09:16 A.M.
7/7
Tres esthetique et super atmosphere!
Jacob Ruytenbeek , February 02, 2005; 11:58 P.M.
I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Maybe a touch more black?
Enrico Barone , February 03, 2005; 03:31 A.M.
Arthur Studio , February 03, 2005; 07:04 P.M.
This is a really remarkable photo. Congratulations.
Jeremiah Winden , February 03, 2005; 10:28 P.M.
Aguiar Thierry , February 04, 2005; 10:32 A.M.
Perfect!
Nothing else to add! Bravo!
Abel Teddy , February 05, 2005; 07:03 A.M.
Hope your model has not caught cold ! good shot
Cristina Vladu , February 05, 2005; 05:50 P.M.
How odd... i'm listening to "let it rain" just now... Deep photo... She seems to be in need of purity... Nice tones. Well done!
Hoang Tran , February 05, 2005; 09:43 P.M.
You might have the idea of naming the foto "vulnerable" but the subject's expression, the background doesn't go in the same tune. IMHO stone/brick wall or blank background might worked for you more advantages.
Jean-Paul Nacivet , February 05, 2005; 10:29 P.M.
Vulnerable
I love your title Han, but as you said the background doesn't fit then.
Here, vulnerable is just a transition to optimism and strenght, if only a generous hand could help.
Any volonteers?
Keep smiling, have fun, and be generous!!ombrella and warm blanket welcome.
Nadya R. , February 06, 2005; 05:21 P.M.
Nice!
Good title and very tasteful and pleasant photo.(but may be the weather is too sharp for photo and a little cold for her?)
Al Magnus , February 08, 2005; 07:08 A.M.
Superbe
Magnifique. Un 7/7 sans aucun doute... et j'ai pas besoin d'une note en retour... je suis tres loin en page 2 des 'most rated". Thanks also for the nice word for Thierry Vezon... all is true!
Yuri Bonder , February 10, 2005; 03:43 A.M.
7/7
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franka bades , February 21, 2005; 06:11 A.M.
congratulations, one of the beautiful photos but of this site
Katya Lin , February 22, 2005; 03:42 P.M.
7/7
Raimondas Baltuskevicius , March 29, 2005; 05:23 P.M.
7/7
Jean-Paul Nacivet , March 30, 2005; 12:26 A.M.
500 MERCI, DANKE, THANK YOU GRACIAS DOMO ALIGATO TERIMAKASI BAGNAC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm a little bit speechless facing my keyboard.
Many thanks to all of you, I hope this picture brings you happiness, for even a little time,even a few seconds.
These 500 ratings marks makes me more than happy.
Even if I know this could not be reached two years ago, and soon the good mark will be a 1000 ratings and more, and we will all take that challenge to be there.
What ever people says about rating or marks like !!!!!!!! ?????????? or other onomatopoeia. It's a very efficient and quick way to express what you think.And of course others who don't have more time than anybody else, but who take time to say it with talented expressions, and exquisite words,what you said makes it way through my heart as well as a good picture, a good painting, sculpture or poem does. Again Thank you.
And don't forget!"Keep smiling!! unless life gives you a real good reason to cry".
K Galstad , April 05, 2005; 01:09 P.M.
500 ratings for this one??? OMG, I guess it's time to quit (already).
Andreas Fischer , June 14, 2005; 05:08 P.M.
one of my favorite pictures here...well done
Rob Kneeshaw , July 19, 2005; 09:39 A.M.
7/7 - Words can not describe how amazing this image actually is!!!
Matthew Menton , September 29, 2005; 08:35 P.M.
Looks like I've wandered in a little late. But all the same I'd like to say that this is my favorite of your collection, and also a top photo on PN. Inspiring.
Rusty Dallas , October 11, 2005; 11:37 P.M.
Dallas
Mikael Steen , October 28, 2005; 04:52 A.M.
This is just beautiful... and very, very original. 7/7
Roberto Baccioni , November 01, 2005; 05:56 A.M.
Dead Angel
An Angel has been killed last week in Bali...
Your photo made me cry.
Roberto
RDj. Kaoy , November 14, 2005; 12:24 P.M.
Johan Ardefors , November 22, 2005; 04:08 A.M.
YES!
Very nice indeed! Good composition and light. You have really succeeded with her expression and the rain as well! Congratulations! / Johan
Raisa Raisa , January 11, 2006; 03:09 A.M.
Hannu Eskelinen , January 15, 2006; 07:58 P.M.
ec mel , March 06, 2006; 04:45 A.M.
feel it
nice shot
feel cold
catch the wet touch
Yasir Nisar , March 15, 2006; 09:42 P.M.
Excellent work
I am enthralled and am speechlessn. The shot is excellnt to say the least. The girl, her expressions, the rain and a wonderful composition makes it perfect.
Wonderful
amg2 sociét , June 24, 2006; 06:36 A.M.
buy rights to use this photo on a novel cover
Dear Sir
We are a french editing company and we would like to buy right to use your artwork on the cover of one of our novel. We use to do that with differents artists in the world and we hope you are intersted in it. PLease contact us : norifumi-goddarh@wanadoo.fr
Best regards.
Bonjour
D鳯l頰our mon anglais mais il a au moins l'int鲪t d'exister... Nous sommes une maison d'餩tion fran硩se et, pour la couverture d'un de nos romans, nous souhaiterions utiliser votre photo. Nous avons d骠 fait ce genre de choses avec des artistes internationaux et, si cela vous interesse, merci de nous conatcter au mail suivant : norifumi-goaarh@wanadoo.fr
Cordialement.
amg2 sociét , June 24, 2006; 06:42 A.M.
AMG2 bis
our e mail is norifumi-goddarh@wanadoo.fr
Rodolfo A. , July 20, 2006; 12:06 A.M.
Rodolfo
Just beautiful. Perfect! 7/7
much firmansyah , August 01, 2006; 11:34 A.M.
Leanna Weber , August 26, 2006; 02:31 A.M.
7/7
Awesome!!!!!! ***Leanna :O)
Anthony J Deffina , August 27, 2006; 10:25 A.M.
Jean-Paul
This is photography at it's absolute best! Here are some more 7's for your collection! -Anthony
Omar Havana , November 04, 2006; 10:54 P.M.
this is under my amateur opinion your best picture, is a sensible shot, beautiful, and great in b/w, this make more dramatic the situation, i like the sensation that i felt when i saw the pic, a great work, thank for this
Giuseppe Circhetta , August 11, 2007; 08:11 P.M.
Unbelivable
I love this shot fot the posture, the B&W, the rain, the background.Everything.
Darren Henry , August 12, 2007; 11:17 A.M.
Simply stunning photo... The tones are nothing short of brilliant!
Steve Lamplugh , November 23, 2007; 08:04 A.M.
A true work of art!!! Brilliant!! 7/7
Cambon Jean Louis , November 26, 2008; 03:55 A.M.
Hello !
Annie Ferderer , January 18, 2009; 07:15 A.M.
Extraordinary...
Jean-Paul, this is beautiful. I love it... her pose and expression, the long wet hair... oh, just beautiful!!
Cheers!
anna.
Henry Chow , January 31, 2009; 12:15 A.M.
Amazing Setting
I really love this picture, especially the set of the feeling, composition. I will like to have a large format print and hang on my den, if you allow me to do so.
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