By: Pat Thielen | View Full Portfolio (50 images)

Equipment: Nikon N90S, Ilford 100, Nikon 85 mm f/1.8

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Photographer's Request for Critique

--Pat Thielen

Critique request

Any written critiques would be greatly appreciated; thanks!

Critiques

Carlos Miguez Macho , January 17, 2005; 03:04 P.M.

It is a very elegant portrait. I like the relation that exists among the gesture of the girl and all these bars that it has ahead taking freedom from her. Very expressive.

Michael Raddatz , January 17, 2005; 04:35 P.M.

Gorgeous. I'd try alternate crop.

Jean-Francois Malouin , January 29, 2005; 11:15 A.M.

Good portrait!

Too bad about the partially hidden eye though.

regards, jf

Steven Meitner , August 29, 2007; 10:11 A.M.

Her hands frame her face beautifully. Her pose and facial expression really compliment the stone and wrought iron. I also noticed the partially obscured eye. I think the leading line from the her left index finger just drew my eye there.

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