Photographer's Request for Critique
--Vezon Thierry
Carnavale
All comments are welcome.
Critiques
Carlos Miguez Macho
, February 13, 2005; 04:36 P.M.
Fantastic. Sorceress. It fills of dynamism. Very elegant.
Mélanie Quintal , February 13, 2005; 04:40 P.M.
Shawn Shawhan 
, February 13, 2005; 07:53 P.M.
One pierrot, five times. Wonderful job. 7/7
Ken Dibert , February 13, 2005; 07:58 P.M.
Striking photograph, perfectly done! 7/7 Encore!
Judy Ben Joud
, February 13, 2005; 08:21 P.M.
splendid and expressive shot with a beautiful achitecture as a background
Paulo Marx , February 13, 2005; 08:30 P.M.
Wonderful!!!
Gabriel M. A. , February 13, 2005; 08:45 P.M.
Vuk Vuksanovic , February 13, 2005; 11:40 P.M.
the joke turned upside down
your mimes looks clumsily pasted in (5 times).
vuk.
brian fulham , February 14, 2005; 02:51 P.M.
No, I don't agree that they look clumsily pasted in, that is a mean and negative remark, but the last figure does look a little large. Anyway, very good idea, well done.
Marco Brivio , February 14, 2005; 03:20 P.M.
Clowns' expressions, ambiance and colors are perfect
Jean Stoque , February 14, 2005; 03:38 P.M.
tip top composition
beautiful birds ( ohhhhhhh sorry) pierrots. a great TVEZON image
Harry Eggens 
, February 14, 2005; 04:34 P.M.
Five Pierrots.....
....One great photographer. The expressions, composition, originallity and contrast are fantastic....Splendid work Vezon....Warm regards, Harry
Jul Man , February 14, 2005; 05:03 P.M.
This is a masterpiece. 7/7
Katya Lin , February 14, 2005; 05:16 P.M.
7/7
Caroline Robinson , February 14, 2005; 08:35 P.M.
Robert Brown 
, February 15, 2005; 12:11 A.M.
I have to agree with one of the previous posts: this is really artificial looking, though somewhat amusing.
Bernhard Mayr , February 15, 2005; 05:00 A.M.
Of course this LOOKS pasted in, it screams photoshop and if it is SO obvious the word 'clumsily' is quite in order.
Stating the obvious is sure negative in this case, but if saying the truth is 'mean' is obviously a matter for debate here on photo.net.
Louis McCullagh - Belfast , February 15, 2005; 12:18 P.M.
Has this been posted here before?????????
Francesco Martini
, February 15, 2005; 02:00 P.M.
fantastic and very original picture!!!!!
Nestor Botta 
, February 15, 2005; 08:48 P.M.
yes, it's a composite, but we only understand that by looking deep into details.
I think the minor "mistakes" (for example, shaddows dropping to both sides), could be obvioused for the very original idea and, after all, very effective aesthetic result.
I wouldn't use the word "clumsily" in a negative sense, cause probably the "clumsy" way of merging the different images was made on purpose to try to give the sense of "not methodically arranged"...
Gabriel M. A. , February 15, 2005; 10:59 P.M.
Marc G.
, February 16, 2005; 06:58 A.M.
Hello, Thierry
It's original, and it's not bad at all, but it still feels pasted. I wish it would be more believable. For example, a detail that spoils the montage imo is the fact that the front person was flipped. Just look at the shadows of the 2 front roses: they go in opposed directions, which makes the lighting impossible. Should we care ? Imo, yes. Regards.
Nuno Palha , February 16, 2005; 07:08 A.M.
Paolo Rella , February 16, 2005; 08:35 A.M.
very great image... compliments!
Biliana Rakocevic , February 16, 2005; 10:11 A.M.
7/7
what can I say more - Fantastic!
J` adore les Pierrots!
Biliana
Cesar Andrade
, February 18, 2005; 06:18 P.M.
BRAVO !!!
Incredible composition !!!
My congrats.
Joseph Bankowski , February 18, 2005; 09:46 P.M.
7/7
Cary Maures
, March 10, 2005; 06:40 P.M.
7/7
Ron Chappel , March 14, 2005; 10:39 A.M.
If a tree falls in a forest and lands on a mime -does anyone care?
Ulf Jahnke , August 24, 2005; 02:18 P.M.
tutku tokol , January 03, 2006; 07:21 P.M.
MY COMPLIMENTS!...
always in my favourites at the photo net!
Ken Dibert , November 26, 2006; 07:31 P.M.
Fabulous!
And another favorite of mine!
Ken Thalheimer 
, May 21, 2007; 08:04 A.M.
I like it, but it's obviously a pasted composite. I think if the shadows were corrected in the front it would help a great deal. Very original & like-able
D. L. Stupski
, May 21, 2007; 07:12 P.M.
The idea is a 7 for originality. So, I have a question (since we're supposed to be learning here). IF the lighting in front were from the camera flash, exactly in the middle of the two front figures, wouldn't it be possible (given that both figures are slightly tilted inward) that each shadow could be cast in a different direction if the flash came from near perfect middle????? The figures don't look flipped to me because the index fingers of the two up from are not the same, if you look closely. Whatever...it is such a shame to get hung up on such trivia when the imagery is so truly delightful. Vezon, you have the eye of a true artist.
Marc-Andre Dumas , May 21, 2007; 08:24 P.M.
Psychotik but really nice ;)
Myish Endonila , May 22, 2007; 12:01 A.M.
i love the concept, it's amazing. however seeing the flaw, i cant help but comment. it's quite true that it looks pasted and quite ackward if you focus first on the pierrots then lead your eyes to the depth of the perespective. the angle of the pierrots doesnt jibe with the perspective. the background should be slightly moved a little to the left. and the pierrots angle should follow the perspevctive line.
but over all this is a magneficent photo. a little adjustment and voila!
Sophie Clemetsa , April 13, 2008; 04:36 A.M.
Affascinante
Like it, beautiful but disturbing.
*Love the wrinkles, traces of a life...botox per lo stupido!
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