Photographer's Request for Critique
--Václav irc
nothing left to say
thanx for your comments ...
Critiques
Beata Jancsik , May 10, 2005; 05:18 P.M.
7/7
I love the mood and the professional camerawork!
phuong quach
, May 10, 2005; 05:49 P.M.
TOO GOOD
Very Professional Skill. Lighting, color and expression on both models are extremely beautiful. I love this scene, please take a couple more shots with diff expression. Thanks for sharing.
Eamon Lane , May 10, 2005; 06:08 P.M.
nothing left to say but 'wonderfully cool'
eamon
Christopher Appoldt , May 10, 2005; 09:43 P.M.
Nothing left to say after "Man, you live like a slob."
Stephanie Saniga
, May 10, 2005; 11:21 P.M.
Katya Lin , May 11, 2005; 12:44 A.M.
7/7
G Steve , May 11, 2005; 04:22 A.M.
Suberb idea and photo composition...Excellent...Wonderful work..
Is the light natural or have you used studio lighting?
Václav irc
, May 11, 2005; 04:37 A.M.
GSteve
i used two studio flashes ... on close ma right hand for women and one near background wall on the left side for man ...
Ken Thalheimer 
, May 11, 2005; 06:28 A.M.
The title is perfect for the shot. The expressions are great. This is an excellent piece which is also technically well done
Hugo Nienhuis , May 11, 2005; 06:45 A.M.
I am not going to say much on your technique: it's outstanding. Still something doesn't fit in the image, it's a little to artificial for my taste. I think it has to do with the pose of the girl. She appears to be standing, not really walking and through the glasses she is looking at me instead of away. Anyway, her pose is a little too much posed if you know what I mean. Still I have to say that it's very good what you are doing.
Jan Scherders , May 11, 2005; 07:17 A.M.
7/7
a real TOP image. concept, expressions, etc, etc
Aivar Pärtel
, May 11, 2005; 11:05 A.M.
Pulok Pattanayak , May 11, 2005; 01:41 P.M.
marco prenninger , May 11, 2005; 04:32 P.M.
looks really cool, but whats wrong with her eyes? they look bit strange underneath those glasses....but very cool mood! well done!
G Steve , May 11, 2005; 04:57 P.M.
Thx for your feedback, much appreciated....For me i find this image to be a winner....i came coming back to see image again and again...
Lucian Cionca , May 11, 2005; 07:12 P.M.
Good picture! Have you ever considered getting into cinematography ? :-)
Biliana Rakocevic , May 12, 2005; 12:19 P.M.
Bravooooooooooooooooooooo!
B:)liana
marc vezina , May 12, 2005; 11:20 P.M.
7/7
You brought a smile to my face and a heartfelt laugh - great great shot
Cheers
hzwhitesnake hzwhitesnake , May 13, 2005; 06:53 A.M.
Angel Pena
, May 13, 2005; 01:56 P.M.
Dima Oukhov , May 13, 2005; 05:05 P.M.
!!!
L Lanner , May 13, 2005; 05:23 P.M.
Tomas Brejsa , June 12, 2005; 11:08 A.M.
Excellent "shot" ...perfektni, asi jako vzdy ..no, snad to take nekdy dokazu ..
Calderon Erick , January 29, 2006; 12:40 A.M.
super professional!
Justin Johnson , September 10, 2006; 04:01 A.M.
the colors and desaturation remind me of the film "Underworld". Very cool IMO.
Congrats!
Dee Na , September 10, 2006; 05:22 A.M.
Awesome!
I love this image a lot. And really love the color and how it's dark and sharp.
Could I ask you how you reach this sort of dark coloring with this beautiful hue?
Did you do that in Photoshop?
Congrats again!
Michael Lyons , September 10, 2006; 03:42 P.M.
7/7
Aamazing lighting and story-telling ability here--model looks like Angelina Jolie--not bad---ML
Haleh Bryan 
, September 10, 2006; 04:02 P.M.
He must have been misbehaving!
Tito Carlos Maria Sobrinho , September 10, 2006; 07:39 P.M.
Very good light. The colors are superb! She is telling...I have a headache!
Samir Jahjah , September 10, 2006; 09:08 P.M.
Excellent composition, lighting. Really nice!
Kveto akov , October 19, 2006; 07:33 P.M.
very blue, but too very compelling
M. Hatapkapulu , August 04, 2007; 04:04 A.M.
7/7
great shot. the title fits perfect to the situation. they both look like they have nothing more to say.
Piotr Czechowski 
, August 04, 2007; 06:56 A.M.
Exceptional work Vaclav. Beautiful light and overall post-processing. Her right eye looks, however a bit strange to my taste. But it's just a tiny little thing :) Congratulations, Piotr
Adam Weklak , August 04, 2007; 07:08 A.M.
wow
a posed flip-off...how original and moving
Ruslan Lavrentyev , February 25, 2008; 01:18 A.M.
I really see nothing to be delighted at! Vulgar gesture, stupidly posed, bad lighting. Are you astonished?
Sarah Fox , February 25, 2008; 01:23 A.M.
I agree that it looks posed, as the young woman's stance seems very static. However, that aside, it's an awsome photo! I love the guy's expression. The best photos tell a story, IMO. This tells one, whether posed or not.
Kirk Dietrich , February 25, 2008; 12:34 P.M.
I don't like that she is looking at the camera. Nice lighting and setting.
Tim Irwin , February 25, 2008; 03:32 P.M.
I agree with others that while it is well done technially (though you could argue the lighting on her arm and hand is too strong) the narrative element of the shot doesn't work due to the artificial poses, the blank facial expressions and the static nature of the scene.
Nataly Rader
, June 20, 2008; 04:25 P.M.
Great image! Strong composition and atmosphere.
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