Photographer's Request for Critique
--Haleh Bryan
Fresco
A modern day attempt of an ancient method.
Critiques
Joe Marlowe , August 11, 2005; 03:39 P.M.
Very nice work!
I really like the way you've done this...the color, the cropping, the lighting...very nice. She sure does look a lot like Nicole Kidman doesn't she?
Tiina Haasma , August 11, 2005; 03:52 P.M.
Beautiful shot ! I like it! Best regards !7/7
Adolfo Valente
, August 11, 2005; 04:30 P.M.
Very fine and original work. The tones are very beautiful. Well done
Per Johansson
, August 11, 2005; 05:11 P.M.
7+7
Classic wonderful picture. Great contact. Lovely colors. And an exiting photoshopwork. This is a landmark.... // Greetings from Sweden
Haleh Bryan 
, August 11, 2005; 05:42 P.M.
Joe
I think Jesse looks better than Nicole Kidman!!!
Haleh Bryan 
, August 11, 2005; 05:43 P.M.
Per
Thank you! It is always so good to hear from you.
Michael Murphy
, August 11, 2005; 06:17 P.M.
7/7
This is perfect. So well done, it needs nothing.
Scott NYC , August 11, 2005; 06:51 P.M.
Mona Lisa
With the cracked oil paint effect it seems like a modern Mona Lisa.
I don't usually like to much Photoshop effects but yours is controlled in a very artisic way.
It reminds me of Sarah Moon.
Great Job!!
Haleh Bryan 
, August 11, 2005; 06:55 P.M.
Scott
I don't always just use PS but I do understand what you mean by misuse of any graphic software and how it can be a turn off.
Scott NYC , August 11, 2005; 07:09 P.M.
Computer semi-literate
Haleh
I'm not sure what you use but whatever it is Bravo!!
Have you ever contacted Surface magazine to do a fashion submission. I don't know if that is something you would ever consider doing but it could work really well.
Haleh Bryan 
, August 11, 2005; 07:29 P.M.
Scott
Thank you for suggesting it. I am trying to get as much exposure as I can but I am very picky. I will look into it.
Amar Khoday
, August 11, 2005; 08:25 P.M.
Haleh, I like the interface between nature and your model here. I think you mentioned before that some of the layers you use are from nature.
I like the stronger emphasis of here while still liking its more subtle inclusion in your other work.
I really like the combination of the colours, the blue eyes, the red lipstick and green, in addition of course to her skin tones.
One small suggestion - I would raise the lower border to just below her chin. It's not that it's not close enough now of course, I just don't think it would hurt to make it tighter.
Haleh Bryan 
, August 11, 2005; 09:14 P.M.
Amar
Why do you think a tighter crop will enhance the image any better?
Don Farra , August 11, 2005; 10:48 P.M.
David Cochran
, August 12, 2005; 12:40 A.M.
Nothing realy to add to the comments, just simply PERFECT!
Thank you for sharing
peace
Amar Khoday
, August 12, 2005; 01:35 A.M.
Nothing that I can really explain Haleh, just a gut thing. Honestly though, I think making it tighter would only change it a slight bit if at all.
Biliana Rakocevic , August 12, 2005; 04:32 A.M.
Top Classic!!
Oh, dear dear Haley :) what can I say more than Brillant and my compliments for this one.
Superb old effect and fantastic face and eyes and all. Love it. love it. love it.
Bravo, bravo and Bravo...
oH.. BRAVOOOOOOOOOOOO
My compliments again,
Sincerly yours,
Biliana
Francisco Pinto , August 12, 2005; 05:35 A.M.
I agree with the the previous comments, just perfect!
Alec Ee 
, August 12, 2005; 11:21 A.M.
Nicole has a longer face. She's beautiful. Nice rendering and lovely skin tones.
Haleh Bryan 
, August 12, 2005; 01:14 P.M.
Biliana
Your comments always make me smile!
David Baker , August 12, 2005; 08:14 P.M.
Brilliant! I like the colors, effect and the intense look in her eyes.
Ayse Yalcin
, August 13, 2005; 06:19 A.M.
Excellent dear Haleh ..Greetings from Turkey...
Razaq Vance , August 13, 2005; 06:39 A.M.
extremely artistic.........a wise use of ps.
Jeff Henderson , August 13, 2005; 08:22 P.M.
Very beautiful, artistic image. I always enjoy viewing your work as you are truly an artist.
Haleh Bryan 
, August 13, 2005; 10:15 P.M.
Jeff
Thank you for your support.
Virgiliu Narcis
, August 14, 2005; 03:12 A.M.
Hello Bryan
What did you mean by.....??
http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=3618948
Paulo Marx , August 14, 2005; 12:58 P.M.
HALLEH
Your photo talk about your skill, and your answers about your soul. Keep it for ever.
Andrea Endisch , August 14, 2005; 04:20 P.M.
Haleh Bryan 
, August 14, 2005; 06:26 P.M.
Virgiliu
I am Haleh and Bryan is my last name! You have your answer where it belongs.
Haleh Bryan 
, August 14, 2005; 06:28 P.M.
Paulo
I am planning on doing this for as long as my creativity flows.
Paula Grenside
, August 16, 2005; 02:53 A.M.
Excllent- The texture and pattern you applied makes this a modern fresco.
Haleh Bryan 
, August 16, 2005; 11:47 A.M.
Paula
Fresco has been always something I wanted to get my hands on photographically speaking. I have tried this method on a few more images which I will be putting up when I am ready. I would appreciate your future comments on them.
Paula Grenside
, August 16, 2005; 02:48 P.M.
I will give my opinion with great pleasure,Haleh. Looking forward to them.
Pulok Pattanayak , August 17, 2005; 01:59 P.M.
Rick Langer
, August 17, 2005; 08:44 P.M.
7/7
This is absolutely beautiful. Really a work of art. The fresco effect if breathtaking. I admire your work very much.
Ada Ipenburg
, August 18, 2005; 05:46 P.M.
I have nothing to add to all the earlier comments. I love this composition not only because of its fresco-effect but because of the mixage with the craquele structure you use here. It underlines the fragility of the skin. I really love to see how the structure flows over into the natural furrows of the lips and a little bit into the right eye like small blood vessels.
It's a an absolutely wonderful piece of art.
Haleh Bryan 
, August 18, 2005; 07:23 P.M.
Ada
Your close observation is greatly appreciated.
Roman Serenko , September 02, 2005; 09:20 P.M.
7/7
Mehmet Tüzün , September 22, 2005; 05:55 A.M.
Chris Allsebrook
, February 22, 2006; 03:53 P.M.
franka bades , September 02, 2006; 03:38 P.M.
Very FINE, pure ART! Congrats.
Jeanne Hansen , September 02, 2006; 04:07 P.M.
Your skill with Photoshop cannot be questioned, but for me, this is way too much Photoshopping and is a real turn-off. The colors are too intense and almost comic bookish. The strands of hair in her face look more like grass than hair. I like the fresco effect.
Jude McConkey
, September 02, 2006; 04:33 P.M.
This is right up my alley.. Taking a beautiful photograph to begin with and giving it more emotion, more depth and story with the effects. I love the fresco, but it's those very colors that draw one in. They are the colors of youth and blossom of love. Beautifully piece of art.
John Holroyd
, September 02, 2006; 05:35 P.M.
Simply awesome. I was just clicking off the front page and this grabbed me, had to back up and take a closer look. Glad I did.
Tom Leech , September 02, 2006; 06:32 P.M.
Wow. This is very engaging image. The eyes just draw me into the image. The effect adds to the intrigure. Great job.
chris mcnulty , September 03, 2006; 08:21 A.M.
I would love to hate this image as this is not my style of photography, but I don't. It is a triumph in all ways. Although I am sure I won't work ever time I would be interested to see more.
Congratulations
Haleh Bryan 
, September 08, 2006; 01:42 P.M.
Chris
I am so happy this one did it!
Chris Waller 
, September 10, 2006; 07:24 A.M.
Russ Rosener
, September 10, 2006; 03:13 P.M.
No Big deal
I'd be more impressed if you did this as a double exposure on film, inside the camera. As it stands, it's a good example of basic use of Photoshop's layers.
Haleh Bryan 
, September 10, 2006; 04:00 P.M.
Thank you all for...
Haleh Bryan 
, September 10, 2006; 04:13 P.M.
Jeanne
Those are grass, not hair!
Tito Carlos Maria Sobrinho , September 10, 2006; 07:32 P.M.
Very well done! Congratulations.
Marco Gutierrez , September 10, 2006; 08:31 P.M.
Breat eyes and I also like the hair strands, and other visual effects. The black background offer good contrast.
Haleh Bryan 
, September 11, 2006; 01:42 A.M.
Marco
Those are not hair strands. They are grass from a floral arrangement above her head.
Debra Trean , January 13, 2007; 02:34 P.M.
creative and beautiful ... I really like this concept..
john daniel navaroo , February 06, 2008; 03:57 A.M.
hi haleh
Cynthia Jean
, September 13, 2008; 07:59 P.M.
Bryan
Excellent. Love your application. Take care
Sanja Nikolic , September 25, 2008; 07:26 P.M.
Wonderful look,and great textures over her face.I like the strong red colour
Bill Ferencz , September 25, 2008; 10:48 P.M.
Do I Have To Repeat It?
I guess I do...a very, very good picture, in every aspect.
The model, the idea, the execution, the colours, the artistic input.
Thank you!
Haleh Bryan 
, September 26, 2008; 01:14 P.M.
Thank you Bill and Sanja
Tulay Besli
, November 17, 2009; 10:39 P.M.
A very artistic work! Held my breath a second. :)
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