Photographer's Request for Critique
--Ron Adair
...ducks in a row
I would like to hear what you think about this photograph. This shot just happened this way,
and was not manipulated digitally or during the shoot. I just got extremely lucky.
Critiques
Daniel Kment , November 29, 2005; 02:47 P.M.
I love the focus reversal and symmetry between man and nature this shot portrays.
Nena Anderson , November 29, 2005; 02:51 P.M.
very nice idea of the reverse focus
Michael DeCorso
, November 29, 2005; 03:06 P.M.
Ziggy Spiz , November 29, 2005; 03:37 P.M.
Ducks
Excellent shot! I love it ? 7/7
According to your specs, you use Nikon lens ? I'm disappointed by out of focus highlights in upper right corner, they tend to create circles or bubbles. I had once tokina superzoom which was creating similar effects, so I get rid of it.
Keep on shooting!
Domen Dolenc , November 29, 2005; 04:46 P.M.
super
Fantastic shot.i love it!7/7
lp Domen Dolenc
Nacho Hernandez , November 29, 2005; 05:37 P.M.
excellent
Great job. DOF works really well here. Composition is great. Nice "story" too.
Excellent photo. Congratulations.
BTW: what is a "reverse focus"?
Nacho Hernandez , November 29, 2005; 05:44 P.M.
Looking at it more in detail, and just to be picky, I might crop the flowers on the left side, and maybe a tiny bit on the bottom. Always a 7/7 tough.
Cheers,
henry reed , November 29, 2005; 10:03 P.M.
As one goose said to another..
This is a very special image. It has the ability to capture the mind and the eye. If displayed in a gallery I would enjoy watching people looking at it, to see if they are drawn into as I am.
Pulok Pattanayak , November 29, 2005; 10:27 P.M.
Excellent capture; like the composition too.
Martin Karlsson , November 30, 2005; 12:46 A.M.
Woah!
I'm speechless! Amazing piece of work! Taken excatly at the right moment.
One thing though, have u tried convert it to b/w?
Think that would be even better ;)
Roshni Abee , November 30, 2005; 01:19 A.M.
haha...wonderful composition...this is simply just a tremendously cute; it makes me smile! awesome work
Iren Nagy
, November 30, 2005; 01:48 A.M.
Wonderful capture! Great timing...It made me smile. It appears as though the ducks are commenting on the young lovers! (ie- remember when we use to do that Honey?!)Cheers! Iren
minnara dhan , November 30, 2005; 02:12 A.M.
visa vis
very nice...
how the nature nurture relations...
& u 've got that an excellent angle...
Rafik Kamel , November 30, 2005; 02:23 A.M.
Excellent idea Ron i really love it, very good thought. Thanks for sharing, great job and best regards!
nathan g , November 30, 2005; 05:08 A.M.
Stephen Forsyth , November 30, 2005; 08:17 A.M.
Great catch, what a moment. Might crop a little as well, but not the bottom. The pink sneaking in at the edges takes a bit away from the repeating pairs, so a little off the sides, and maybe the the top, could work.
And two lights on the post, as well. Lucky.
Matthew Leong , November 30, 2005; 09:04 A.M.
wow, great 7/7 just beautiful...
Sarah Underhill
, November 30, 2005; 10:09 A.M.
Very cute ,happy photo! Great capture...this one made me smile!
Mehmet Saygin , November 30, 2005; 10:35 A.M.
Very nice photograph, somehow it makes me feel good :)
James Baker , November 30, 2005; 11:52 A.M.
Nancy Holtz , November 30, 2005; 12:14 P.M.
Serendipity Dust Sprinkled here!
Hi ~ Thanks for sharing this pic that you were sooo lucky to be there right at the moment to make it stand still in time! Thanks for the warm Smile it brought to my grey rainy day here. I can't help but Smile, this is sooo neat. Hmmm I wonder did the couple kissing ever take notice to the Ducks, and visa versa did the Ducks happen to notice the Kissing Couple! :) I just love when Simple Pleasure Magic is captured this way in pics! Nancy :)
seckin aziz top , November 30, 2005; 03:05 P.M.
excellent 7/7
very well composed.beautiful.liked so much.
Haleh Bryan 
, November 30, 2005; 04:17 P.M.
Now this is a picture worth a thousand words! Romance is in the air...where is this place? I might want to go there for inspiration!
mario balzan , November 30, 2005; 04:40 P.M.
I can imagine what the ducks are saying. This is a unique shot. 7/7.
Robert Semnic , December 01, 2005; 02:12 A.M.
7/7
Jana Vanourkova 
, December 01, 2005; 05:56 A.M.
well seen, good use of the lower angle and DOF, cheers Jana
Thomas Detert
, December 01, 2005; 07:39 A.M.
Wonderful shot
Right place at the right time with a bit of luck is how the best photos get taken.. Great job! Flawless photo IMHO.
Luca Moi , December 01, 2005; 01:17 P.M.
Catherine Reyes , December 01, 2005; 02:05 P.M.
What a moment! Thanks for sharing this photo - it definitely brought a smile...
tolga tacmahal , December 01, 2005; 04:40 P.M.
:)
Manish Kumar , December 02, 2005; 12:54 A.M.
ha ha ha
this is perfect... wonder what the ducks are talking..
Keith McCann , December 02, 2005; 01:08 A.M.
i dont know what it is about this shot but i LOVE it this must have been alucky shot a husband an wife couple and a male and female duck couple absolutly stunning!!!no 7's here this is a 10 great work
Marta Eva LLamera 
, December 02, 2005; 04:45 A.M.
Simply excellent image. Thanks. Regards.
Manuel Magni
, December 02, 2005; 06:37 A.M.
Beautiful shot!!!
very nice and sweet moment in 5 lives.
Manuel.
zulfiqar ali , December 02, 2005; 07:46 A.M.
Beautiful shot...nice idea and brilliantly achieved!!!
Strauch Georges Antoine
, December 02, 2005; 08:40 A.M.
The shot with a big T
no comment ! Tout est dit sur la photo ... et le reste on le devine ;-)
Ron Adair , December 02, 2005; 02:46 P.M.
Wow
Updated photo, flowers gone...What do you think?
Thank you all for your wonderful comments. I have always thought this was one of my luckiest (and best) shots. I have gotten some good responses from individuals who have seen it in my studio and such, but I didn't know you guys would treat it so well in the critique and rating forum. Thanks for your support, and for your suggestions.
Stephen, as for your comments about the repeating pairs, and the third bit of pink flowers on camera left...Funny you should mention that. I just had a friend mention the same thing not two or three days before I posted this here. Nobody had noticed that before, but I think it is a wonderful suggestion, and when I have a second I will do that and provide an update here.
Manish, I agree. I always wonder when I look at the brown duck...What is he whispering under his breath to his little honey. A bit corny, I know, but it really does look like there is an amazingly authentic level of interaction happening between the ducks, as with the couple. Even the ducks' feet are perfectly synchronous, and symmetrical. This photograph has proven to me undeniably that perfect moments do happen. It is simply our job to capture them.
Thanks again for all your comments.
Ron Adair , December 02, 2005; 02:48 P.M.
Decided to stop being lazy...
Here it is. I updated the photo with the suggestion of ridding it of the third bunch of flowers on camera left. I like it. What are your thoughts?
Curt Sletten
, December 08, 2005; 09:01 P.M.
Fun
This one is just fun to look at.
'Nuff said.
Henrik Nilsson , December 11, 2005; 10:16 P.M.
This is one of the best shots I've seen in a long time. One duck says to the other "we could do that".
Jason Jimerson , September 07, 2006; 10:45 A.M.
Like the final crop. You made a great photo even better.
Mario Paper Martinez Caballero , September 07, 2006; 01:17 P.M.
Wonder !!!
Nice view very clear and great point of view !!!
Angelo Plessas , February 18, 2007; 04:17 A.M.
Superb capture.. you have to have an eye to see that ..!
My regards !
Annette Crummey , February 18, 2007; 10:19 A.M.
Rossy Topalova , February 18, 2007; 08:49 P.M.
very good fun. I think in b/w will be more strong, but now is very fresh and funny.
AmirAli Sharifi
, May 16, 2007; 07:31 A.M.
Leanna Weber , April 11, 2008; 02:07 A.M.
YES...THIS IS PERFECT. :O)
hamed sajedi pour
, April 20, 2009; 10:58 A.M.
G R E A T
Great Shot .you capture a really nice and interesting scene. it has perfect dof and composition...Well done . thanks for sharing
Best Wishes , Hamed
Cenk M. Yetis , April 20, 2009; 01:24 P.M.
very funny and good
it's unbelievable that it's a natural instance.. very lucky and great timing.. nice photo
jorge fernandez 
, April 20, 2009; 05:23 P.M.
"Lets see the Parrots" TOGETHER
Ron you get a great image with a message for all. But if you are not........enjoying this image could be the desperate need to be with someone? Bravo. Regards from Miami.
Anthony Poston
, April 20, 2009; 07:36 P.M.
Great Shot!
If not inteded this way..I would say luck...great and wonderful luck!
Taavi Turvas , October 29, 2009; 01:59 A.M.
Excellent picture. Reverse focus gives to picture imaginable story.
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