Photographer's Request for Critique

--mark hebblewhite

Folding Lady

A play on light and shape of the female form.

Critiques

Oliv'images Photography , January 06, 2006; 07:02 A.M.

Good composition but it' a little bit too dark

Robert Jendra , January 06, 2006; 07:03 A.M.

Need a little more light I have to look to hard to see the image I like the idea. personal opinion. Regards bpb

Robert Farnham , January 06, 2006; 07:39 A.M.

It's great. The composition is awesome and the light on her legs give the photo a very seductive energy.
Just brighten the highlights a touch but not too much. Watch that hotter spot on her shoulder, though, so it doesn't blow out.
Robert

mark hebblewhite , January 06, 2006; 08:04 A.M.

Thank you

Olivier, Robert and Robert:
I actually darkened this by 2 stops, but am able to brighten the image without blowing out the shoulders.
This is great, genuine consensus. Thank you very much for your comments.

Philippe Carly , January 06, 2006; 11:01 A.M.

At first I was going to agree that whiter highlights would improve the photo. But the more I look at it, the more I believe it is perfect as it is. More intriguing, more atmosphere.

Darrell M , January 06, 2006; 01:03 P.M.

nice

nice photo. i like the other one, the dagger, even more

Milan Krepelka , January 11, 2006; 09:22 A.M.

good

Aguimas Makjeite , March 01, 2006; 06:16 P.M.

Very nice photo.

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