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Monica 109

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Charles Mifsud , July 17, 2006; 02:40 A.M.

Charles.

What makes this compositin are theshiloutted contours of the face and it takes so little light and detail and yet so much creativity to make this great shot.Congrats.

Andrew Jackson , July 17, 2006; 04:48 A.M.

Love this idea, nice image

erwin bosman , July 17, 2006; 07:16 A.M.

most appealing work ! congrats

erwin

Phoenix Ikki , July 17, 2006; 12:14 P.M.

interesting composition and siluet. Imho, might be better if the model just shows a little smile and not open her lips/mouth too much .... Thanks.

Ten Ox , July 18, 2006; 08:38 A.M.

Lowkey

Good work. Please try to lower background distraction slightly, especially lower the tonal value in top left corner: it competes slightly with the subject.

Otherwise, it defines the concept well.

Yasmin Martin , July 18, 2006; 12:31 P.M.

I love the lighting. It's very beautiful, great work.

carlos perez , July 18, 2006; 02:30 P.M.

great work, but the open mouth is a little distracting due to the fact that you can see just a little bit of teeth or something in between, doesn't hurt this image too bad, but just makes it not as clean. Otherwise great idea and lighting.

Jana Vanourkova , July 18, 2006; 04:39 P.M.


Beautiful. I also am distracted by the "teeth" they shine just a little bit too much. cheers Jana

Afsane Poloie , July 19, 2006; 05:22 A.M.

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Kent Draper , July 19, 2006; 12:52 P.M.

Great shot

Very, very nice pic. Love the black and white. Congrats

Kent

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