Photographer's Request for Critique
--Mehmet Ozgur
Smoke works - 18/20: Sirens
another addition to the smoke series.
Beguiled by our own fantasies, living in sand castles and smoke gardends.
Critiques
Alex Bieth , August 01, 2006; 10:32 A.M.
Yann Roffiaen 
, August 01, 2006; 11:48 A.M.
My favorite from the smoke folder. Bravo, bravo, bravo... 7/7
Christin Gilbert 
, August 01, 2006; 01:22 P.M.
I see a long hair girl looking at the light.... very creative...!
Jef Van den Houte 
, August 01, 2006; 01:28 P.M.
Smoke works
Indeed very creative and original
Alin Balanean , August 01, 2006; 05:11 P.M.
Another brilliant composition of this series! You are a genius! ;) Best regards!
Floriana Barbu 
, August 02, 2006; 03:37 A.M.
This is a smoke poem. Congrats !
Gareth Dix , August 02, 2006; 09:08 A.M.
beautiful 7/7 this reminds me a little of george caswell's picture of the smoke forming the shape of a grim reaper for an anti-smoking campaign, however that was manipulated
dash shah , August 02, 2006; 12:55 P.M.
u kno wat........it looks like a lady on her way to heaven
Mehmet Ozgur , August 02, 2006; 03:37 P.M.
Hi Gareth, per your reference I looked at George's work, some of which are very well known, and saw the particular image you mentioned. I found it very interesting and I am glad to learn that there are others who are doing similar kind of smoke compositions. Thank you for pointing out his work.
Bahri BUDAK , August 03, 2006; 03:22 P.M.
Unbeleiveble.Regards.
Bahri
Razaq Vance , August 04, 2006; 04:35 A.M.
7\7
Saleem Khawar , August 07, 2006; 12:50 P.M.
7++++7++++
wow !!!woow!!!
Regards Khawar.
Lukas Ondrousek , August 08, 2006; 04:23 A.M.
very nice! as well as rest of the smoke photos.
i wrote u a mail - did u get it? plz, contact me on tetonpage@yahoo.com
thank u
Henri Manguy 
, August 12, 2006; 11:50 A.M.
Great composition which have certainly required very much work.
Pnina Evental 
, August 14, 2006; 11:32 P.M.
Interesting effect Mehmet, nice composition.
Ruud Albers , August 28, 2006; 09:39 A.M.
Jana Vanourkova 
, September 01, 2006; 04:46 P.M.
wouw, very airy, cheers Jana
Scott Butler , April 16, 2007; 04:35 P.M.
Daughter of Eve?
In addition to the young woman who appears to be walking away, I also see a snake/serpent in the right-front foreground with his tongue slithering under her legs. Is that just me???
It makes me think of the conflict of Eve and the temptation proposed by the serpent. Since the woman is clothed, it would not be the original Eve, but her descendant. Since the woman is turning from the serpent to some glorious light, I would like to think that she has rejected his offer, what ever it might be, for something higher. However the expression of satisfaction and glee on the snake suggests he has just succeeded in some evil trickery...and she is walking unaware into great peril!
In any case, it is quite beautiful!
Scott
Mehmet Ozgur , April 16, 2007; 10:49 P.M.
Back to where we belong
We need the ultimate miracle to go back to that fateful moment, and lure away Eve from the serpent, thus save all humanity from the suffering.
Like the original interpretation. Thanks Scott. -I think should work on the serpent a bit more though. oh well, another thing to add to my ever-growing todo list.-
Brad Kim 
, April 19, 2007; 02:32 A.M.
Amazing work, Mehmet....! My hearty congratulations!
Alberto Sepulveda , February 22, 2008; 08:26 A.M.
impressed
I'ver never been such impressed with an art work, congratulations, it's sublime
Khalifa Aldhahri , October 09, 2008; 12:43 A.M.
wonderful
amazing composition
the exposure was brilliant
Tulay Besli 
, October 19, 2009; 12:50 P.M.
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