Photographer's Request for Critique
--Bryan Olesen
Swallows
Any comments?
Critiques
Tommy Armour , December 23, 2006; 01:43 P.M.
Great Capture
Excellent action shot! Not only is the composition, dof, and color well done; it is a little narrative.
Jitka Unverdorben , December 23, 2006; 01:49 P.M.
Gary Pardoe
, December 23, 2006; 01:55 P.M.
Chris Best , December 23, 2006; 02:04 P.M.
This is extremely beutiful to me.
Dan Mustar
, December 23, 2006; 03:48 P.M.
What a stroke of luck to capture such interaction.Excelent job with exposure,DOF and sharpness.
Roberto Anil
, December 23, 2006; 09:14 P.M.
Excellent
Great shot. Congratulations
What was the problem ? A chick ?
7/7
Curtis Forrester 
, December 24, 2006; 08:12 A.M.
7/7
Paul Wegemann , December 24, 2006; 01:41 P.M.
Beautiful. You should submit this to a birding magazine.
David Morgan , December 24, 2006; 02:09 P.M.
Kim Allsebrook
, December 24, 2006; 02:10 P.M.
7/7
A superb shot.... very well done... Kim :o)
Dan T
, December 24, 2006; 02:46 P.M.
7/7
Brian...excellent capture...how exciting to have captured this moment...well done...DanT
Umair Ghani
, December 24, 2006; 02:48 P.M.
wow! awesome! just great! regards!
max numerosette
, December 24, 2006; 03:45 P.M.
Wendy de Kok , December 24, 2006; 04:00 P.M.
^o^
Very funny action shot! Very nice colors and details.
cyrus K , December 25, 2006; 03:49 A.M.
Vey fine action jot my friend, have a Happy Holiday season.
Cheers.
Amir Sadeghi , December 25, 2006; 02:39 P.M.
Thanks
Well done man, very very excelent shot of birds
Pnina Evental 
, December 26, 2006; 03:12 P.M.
Decisive moment, Bryan, right in between their quarreling..;-)) Nice shot.
John North , January 07, 2007; 07:30 A.M.
Donn Dobkin
, January 13, 2007; 10:37 P.M.
Really outstanding
This is among the best of the best. Getting great compositions and behaviors, along with perfect technical execution and composition... it doesn't get any better than this. Fantastic Job!!!
meghan denny , February 04, 2007; 10:03 P.M.
way to go!
wow!! i love the flapping wings, yet clear as day subjects!!!!
man my pictures really don't compare up to urs at all!!!!
way to go!
Geoff Smith , February 17, 2007; 03:01 P.M.
Unique capture Bryan. Nice light, DOF, action.
Sophia Douma , February 23, 2007; 02:30 P.M.
What a moment!!excellent action shot!
Alex Milarakis 
, July 18, 2007; 01:57 A.M.
Amazing
Unique capture, you catch the moment. An excellent photo technicaly flawless. Congrats !
Syed Irfan , July 18, 2007; 04:27 A.M.
Keep Out...
I have read all the comments. Most of them are excellent, amazing, fab, fantastic.....etc. etc. Well, these terms are very generic and can mean differently for different people. I agree, sometimes, we can not explain what we feel and take advantage of these terms. And, on the other hand, sometimes we fail to appreciate the specific value and .... again .... take advantage of these terms! I see a difference in the use in both cases.
No doubt this is a "good" shot .... sorry for being rude to above comments .... and all the points go to freezing such a lovely moment.
Let me share why i like this shot: Look at the eye contact of these birds! Great scene that both are very direct and determined. It could be a teritorial fight and see how the defendent is yelling at the intruder! The intruder seems very confident and damn serious. Its landing motion is creating a real value of this event!
What i am unable to understant is that the left wing of the landing bird is in full swing and covering the other bird (as the traces show) ... and at the same time .... the bird on the left is looking very sharp?? Bryan can you comment on this?
It would be very helpful if you could share some other details like the lens used, shutter speed, aperture, ISO, your distance from birds etc. Thanks.
Bryan Olesen , July 18, 2007; 10:30 A.M.
Hi Syed, Thanks for your time and comments. I've added the tech details for you and others to see. As for the shutter speed and the left bird being more focused: a 640th of a sec was enough to freeze the swallow on the left because it was almost stationary at the time, but I would have probably needed about a 2000th of a sec (or less) to freeze the landing one. It's kinda strange that they both wanted this little spot on the railing - there was plenty of room all around for lots of birds to land - it just had to have that particular spot. Oh well, makes for a nice image for me...
Carlos Guaimare 
, July 18, 2007; 10:45 A.M.
An amazing picture!
I think you are an allien. No human being could capture this right moment :-)
Shakeel Maqbool , July 18, 2007; 04:57 P.M.
7/7
wow Dashing pic Congratulations God Bless U
Angel Pulido DomÃnguez , August 11, 2007; 02:55 P.M.
This a great image... Well Done!!
Naseer Fedaee , December 08, 2007; 04:25 A.M.
Wowwwwwwwww...!
- Congratulation -
WellDone and beautiful shot!
Paul D , December 08, 2007; 08:37 P.M.
Wo Ho HO!
Talk about capturing the moment! Superb!
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