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Fashion on cross

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Iker Iglesias , November 13, 2007; 01:38 P.M.

Interesante trabajo Ramon... Quizas habria preferido un encuadre vertical. Considero que el corte en la pierna es algo brusco y la composici�n bastante enmara�ada, con las masas sin ningun tipo de equilibrio.

La idea me parece buena, y el esfuerzo en iluminarla con dramatismo es de agradecer, pero veo el trabajo algo incompleto para que la imagen pudiera llegar a ser destacable sin la impresi�n que causa gracias a la idea en s Seguro que eres capaz de mejorarla,

un abrazo,


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Hassan Ajmi , November 13, 2007; 01:39 P.M.

Hallo ramon, Excellent . 7/7

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J Michael , November 13, 2007; 01:51 P.M.

How many versions of this are you going to post?

Seems like a daily occurance...interesting concept, but at this point, I wonder if you are just enjoying the attempt of getting people upset about the theme?

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Antonio S. , November 13, 2007; 02:03 P.M.

Strong impact. Excellent.


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Raymond St. George , November 13, 2007; 06:17 P.M.

I'll say this: you're model selection has definitely improved. This is a very erotic image, although the crown of thorns and cross distract from the sensuality of the pose/lighting. Since she's manifestly not in any kind of torment (almost the opposite) you could loose the cross nonsense and have a really excellent nude. Turn her palms down, keep the pose - maybe even modify the bikini bottom (not sure about that).

If you pulled her hair back you could also crop at the torso and have a very effective image. The only drawback with that would be the rather harsh light across her breasts - its kind of burned out there. Softer light with less harsh shadow under her left breast.

Would love to see more and better use of this model - she's excellent!


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Gorm Rudschinat , November 14, 2007; 10:33 A.M.

Excellent work , love the composition :)Gorm

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Awik Balaian , November 15, 2007; 06:32 A.M.


Just love it!!!!!!

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Drea Holland , March 10, 2009; 09:23 P.M.


This is very disturbing. You have taken one of the most beautiful and wonderful things, the price Jesus paid for you and for me, and turned it into something disgusting. I don't know how you can justify this. It's porn.

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Ramon Martinez , March 13, 2009; 01:49 A.M.

Drea Holland´s profil

Drea Holland, I have seen your profil:


It seems that your only activity in PN is 1, and only to criticize this image of my work. You speake about pornography. Well, on the churchs they are many half-naked men on crosses.

Maybe you have habit of complaining in the churches also.

Emmalina Mozart , March 25, 2011; 02:03 P.M.

nice work

my name is Emmalina from austria vienna and i like your work  .. i am a model too 

continue your good work

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Bjorn Moback , March 05, 2012; 02:48 P.M.




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Bjorn Moback , March 06, 2012; 02:47 A.M.


Bettina Rheims

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