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Fashion on cross

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Iker Iglesias , November 13, 2007; 01:38 P.M.

Interesante trabajo Ramon... Quizas habria preferido un encuadre vertical. Considero que el corte en la pierna es algo brusco y la composici�n bastante enmara�ada, con las masas sin ningun tipo de equilibrio.

La idea me parece buena, y el esfuerzo en iluminarla con dramatismo es de agradecer, pero veo el trabajo algo incompleto para que la imagen pudiera llegar a ser destacable sin la impresi�n que causa gracias a la idea en s Seguro que eres capaz de mejorarla,

un abrazo,

iker

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Hassan Ajmi , November 13, 2007; 01:39 P.M.

Hallo ramon, Excellent . 7/7

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J Michael , November 13, 2007; 01:51 P.M.

How many versions of this are you going to post?

Seems like a daily occurance...interesting concept, but at this point, I wonder if you are just enjoying the attempt of getting people upset about the theme?

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Antonio S. , November 13, 2007; 02:03 P.M.

Strong impact. Excellent.

Antonio

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Raymond St. George , November 13, 2007; 06:17 P.M.

I'll say this: you're model selection has definitely improved. This is a very erotic image, although the crown of thorns and cross distract from the sensuality of the pose/lighting. Since she's manifestly not in any kind of torment (almost the opposite) you could loose the cross nonsense and have a really excellent nude. Turn her palms down, keep the pose - maybe even modify the bikini bottom (not sure about that).

If you pulled her hair back you could also crop at the torso and have a very effective image. The only drawback with that would be the rather harsh light across her breasts - its kind of burned out there. Softer light with less harsh shadow under her left breast.

Would love to see more and better use of this model - she's excellent!

RSG

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Gorm Rudschinat , November 14, 2007; 10:33 A.M.

Excellent work , love the composition :)Gorm

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Awik Balaian , November 15, 2007; 06:32 A.M.

Nice!!!

Just love it!!!!!!

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Drea Holland , March 10, 2009; 09:23 P.M.

Disturbing

This is very disturbing. You have taken one of the most beautiful and wonderful things, the price Jesus paid for you and for me, and turned it into something disgusting. I don't know how you can justify this. It's porn.

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Ramon Martinez , March 13, 2009; 01:49 A.M.

Drea Holland´s profil

Drea Holland, I have seen your profil:

http://photo.net/photodb/user?user_id=4982325

It seems that your only activity in PN is 1, and only to criticize this image of my work. You speake about pornography. Well, on the churchs they are many half-naked men on crosses.

Maybe you have habit of complaining in the churches also.

Emmalina Mozart , March 25, 2011; 02:03 P.M.

nice work

my name is Emmalina from austria vienna and i like your work  .. i am a model too 

continue your good work

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Bjorn Moback , March 05, 2012; 02:48 P.M.

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Original??

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Bjorn Moback , March 06, 2012; 02:47 A.M.

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Bettina Rheims

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