Leslie Nicole
, August 29, 2009; 02:43 A.M.
zoom in
Hi Howard,
I can see what you intend to portray, but might I suggest that next time you zoom way in to select few flowers so you can see the raindrops glistening? The background doesn't tell us anything. We want to experience the same thing you did, the freshness of these flowers and the glistening colors. To do that, you need to zoom way in and throw the background out of focus. I would have chosen that group of 3 flowers clustered in the lower left. Anyway, that's my opinion, give it a try next time. :-)
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