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naughty schoolgirls

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Mark Chartrand , April 09, 2009; 02:09 P.M.

naughty schoolgirls

Johnny,

Pretty girl - love her hair - Nice shape - Good skin tone - Very good composition - Nicely sharp focus - great specular highlights on her shoes - You have shown off her lovely legs and bottom very well (to bad about the shadow are on her right leg - almost looks like she has a little cellulite, but I'm sure it is just the shadow - also, the line of her right leg is not very pleasing - makes that leg look a little bowlegged).

Her left hand looks a bit awkward on her leg as does the right (if you would show the edge of the fingers it would be more slimming, feminine and graceful - you have cut into both of her irises (with a split profile - tip of nose touching the far cheek which, of course, is a posing error - it is common for the eye to be cut with the bridge of the nose) - with the eyes being cut you could have no catch light in her eyes to give her life - a back or hair light would have separated her more from the background.

Nice shot,

Mark

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Arash khoshghadam , April 10, 2009; 04:32 A.M.

Mark says it all, plus the unevenness of the lighting of the top and the bottom. the top is well-lit but the bottom is poorly so.

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